Matthew Sullivan, “Little Men” (The Masters Review Anthology, Volume VI)
Another solid story in The Masters Review Anthology, Volume VI (2017), is “Little Men,” by Matthew Sullivan.
Lois is at her son’s baseball practice one day when a little
man (“Three, four inches” tall [p. 63]) lands on her sandal. She takes in the
little man and keeps him fed and cared after in a tin box or a shoebox for some
time, while we witness the harshness of her day-to-day life: her son, Alan, is
a criminal in the making, who crushed a fellow player’s mouth with a bat in
practice and who enjoys torturing animals and toys. Lois gets visions of him in
the future, committing crimes. Her husband, Howard, claims he’s traveling for
work while he’s on week-long escapades with prostitutes. She sticks with Howard
into old age, and in the dramatic present of the story, forty years after Lois
found the little man, we see Howard forgetful and oxygen-dependent, looked
after by his wife.
Lois is having serious issues remembering things, so the
many flashbacks and memories laced into the story come naturally to a piece
textured by Lois’s struggle to remember. We learn that Alan did in fact become
a criminal: he violently murdered his wife.
Howard and Lois expect Alan for dinner the day the story
unfolds, but we find out that he is in jail and will be executed the following
day. Someone from church comes to ask Lois to pick up the phone that night, to
receive Alan’s last phone call. The phone rings at the end of the story, and
neither Howard nor Lois pick up.
I have omitted the fate of the little man: at one point, Lois
is ironing Howard’s shirts with the little man close by her. Lois is bothered
by the little man’s constant crying, and furious at Howard’s infidelity and her
son’s behavior. The little man tells her, sobbing, that what he wants is her.
She envisions a life with the little man, away from it all. “And then Lois
brought the iron down right on top of him, the Little Man, pinning him against
the edge of the ironing board, and pressed, pressed, pressed—first with her
arm, then with the full weight of her body, rocking the iron bow to stern until
his squealing became hissing and the hissing bubbled to a stop” (p. 70). With
this scene, we find out how the little man ended up dead. Lois had found him dead
and burnt early in the story and for several pages puzzled over what happened.
The substory with the little man is, of course, very suggestive.
The author plays with the idea of the Fall from our first glimpses of the
little man: “Not five minutes before the Little Man’s fall […]” (p. 55); “the
Little Man had not fallen, but jumped” (p. 56). Lois’s struggle with the men in
her life is bound up with the little man, with his burning desire for her and
her ability to control and destroy him. The title invites us to make this
connection: the story is not called “Little Man,” but “Little Men.” They all
depend on her and drain her and use her.
My main objection with the story, if I have any, is that it
starts on very firm footing compared with the swaying quality of the rest of
the narrative: we get a clear look at the little man and how he entered Lois’s
life. It makes for a good start to the story, but the rest of the time we’re
hamstrung by Lois’s faulty memory, so why start with such clarity? It would’ve
been truer to the story, though perhaps dramatically less attractive, to begin
with her finding the corpse of the little man and walk us through Lois piecing
together her memories of the little man afterward. Finding out about Alan’s
execution as we did speaks well of the story and is true to the framework of
Lois’s memory.
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